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Carisma stumbled back to her tent feeling faint. Thing were coming back to her, images of being tortured. She whipped open the flap of her tent and collapsed on the floor before her bed. Nota jumped up and waddled to her to examine her limp body before she went unconscious. And she dreamed… Bad dreams… Such bad dreams. "What are you doing?! I-I trusted you!" Carisma screamed at a slightly younger version of Barley as she was dragged backward and forced into a small, dark space. She curled up into a ball, put her head between her knees and clutched huge fistfuls of brown hair. Tears rolled down her face. Suddenly there

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As the sun sunk below the clouds Lisa waited by the shrine for the Archangels. Much to her dismay Amy was the first to arrive, "The others are going to be late." She sounded a lot more serious than usual. Slowly the others began to arrive. Barley brought Mae along and she was looking slightly worried about something. A blue jay sat on her shoulder looking around taking in the scene. Jewel and Claude stood off to the side watching everyone gather. "Okay I think we have everyone," Lisa's gaze drifted over the other angels, it seemed like she was missing one but she couldn't figure out who. "What about that little hyper girl who is obsesse

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Barley began to wake up to something cold and wet being dragged across his face. He snapped his eyes open and tried to bolt up but a small hand stopped him. "Careful Barley, I don't want you tearing open your cuts again." His vision was blurry at first, but finally it came into focus and he saw Mae standing over him. Her soft black hair fell over her face as she bent over Barley and continued to dab at him with a wet cloth, "Isabel really beat you up pretty bad." Mae was a kind of healer angel in the city and lived in the same small housed neighborhood as Barley. Barley found it strange that Mae never called Lady Isabel Lady Isabel, she

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Bree wandered aimlessly through the forest. Days turned into weeks and training with Uriel was torture. She was actually starting to miss Claude. All she ever did now was sit on the ground and try to move a leaf with her mind, which Bree was starting to doubt, could even be done. Since the leaf didn't have a mind of its own, it was impossible to grab onto it with Bree's own mind. Come to think of it, Uriel hadn't even shown her that she could do it… so maybe it was impossible. "Bree look out!" Felix warned just a little too late as Bree smacked into a tree, bringing her back to the real world. She stumbled around the tree and tripped i

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For some reason when Claude had washed the silver off his body, it remained stained to his wings, which was probably a good thing. In all his life as a demon Claude had never seen an angel with black wings, so he figured it would be a dead give away to what he really was. Now he was just sitting in his new house trying to figure out what to do next. He stared at Cloak for a moment, who was still in the form of a crow, "Why haven't you changed form at all since we have gotten here?" Claude asked. Cloak ruffled his feathers, "Believe me when I say I am not happy about this but, well when we changed it appears I got stuck in this form…I

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Lisa sat on her bed with Snowy lying next to her. She had spent the past four hours trying to figure out what to do. Lady Isabel was going to be the death of them all, if they didn't do anything. It was kind strange how Lady Isabel acted now, she wasn't very angelic at all. The thought of forming a rebellion and going to the demon camp herself had crossed Lisa's mind a couple of times, but each time she would quickly shake it out. How on Earth would she get anyone else to go against Lady Isabel? Even Jewel, her best friend had thought she was crazy. "What should I do Snowy?" She asked her soul guard. "That is a hard question Lisa, I kn

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It wasn't until the middle of the night that Bree started wondering where Claude was. At first she just assumed he had gotten side tracked and went to his clearing, but he wasn't there. The next place she decided to look was his tent. It was slightly difficult to figure out where his tent was because she had never really been to it before. But with the help of other demons and soul guards, she managed to find it, only to discover that her efforts were fruitless. Finally, she gave up and went back to her tent with Felix, "I wonder where he is…" She said out loud, fingering the picture of her family next to her bed. "Hmmm, I don't know

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Claude watched as the new demons came into the camp. In all there were five new ones, not including Uriel. Lexi and Uriel had done some more negotiations after Bree and himself had left and somehow they had changed it so that the camp the city swapped six each. It took some time to figure out who from the camp would be going. Bree wanted to go but Lexi said she couldn't go unless Claude did, and Claude had no interest in going to some strange Demon city, so they had stayed. Elizabeth had been getting better, and she wanted to go, Lexi didn't know how to say no to her so Elizabeth and Gretchen had left two days before with five other demons

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Lisa jumped back to avoid the shadowy thing's jagged blade. She had been walking around on the ground lost in though when she was ambushed by the thing. At first she thought it was a demon, until she had gotten a good look at it. Now its red eyes gleamed as it grinned at her. She couldn't figure out exactly what it was. It kept changing form. First it was panther, then a wolf, and now some other unknown animal. Lisa shot an arrow at the thing, but for some reason it just went straight through it without phasing it at all. It jumped at her again, but this time Lisa was backed up against something. Her eyes widened and her lips parted to f

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"Bree," Lexi was suddenly behind her right after Claude was out of sight, "go to Elizabeth and see if you can get anything out of her." Bree gazed at Lexi then down at Lilly's small body. She didn't exactly know how to react, she hardly knew the girl, "Okay," she responded blankly. Lexi nodded and left, the same direction Claude had disappeared, leaving her alone. Bree remained where she was for a second looking again at the body lying on the ground. Poor Claude, a voice echoed in her head. Bree looked down to find Felix gazing at the body as well, wow what--how did you do that? Same way you are, come on we should get to Elizabeth'

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Dec 18
United States
Deviant for 13 years
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Well I am an artist who lacks a scanner or good computer programs, so I am just going to have to stick with the writing for now. Please be kind when you read Umbra, it is my first real book and is really just my first draft, so a lot of it will be rewritten

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Umbraartest

Apr 27, 2011

No inspiration

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hmmm... I am finding lately that I am lacking inspiration for my story Umbra... I really want to write the next chapter, and I have struggled through like a page of it but I just don't think my writing is any good at the moment... I really wish some sort of inspiration would strike me and I would write another good chapter. It would be the first good chapter in a while. I have also been noticing that the chapters I do write are becoming shorter and shorter, I am used to having about 4 to 5 pages, about 2,000 some odd words, and lately I have been coming out with 3 pages and around 1500 words, it really sucks. Of course there is always the kno